Please stop by and comment on our all our books, including children's books, both current and soon to be released. I look forward to reading your suggestions and thoughts.
Aloha
Thursday, November 08, 2007
The Gift
He gazed at her and smiled From deep within his soul, A treasure presented …
She turned and gave him her heart And walked into All their memories of tomorrow …
You have written a lovely tercet poem with strong feelings and good rhythmic flow. I love the way the imagery speaks to me. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. You are always in my mind. Take care until next we chat.
Hello my friend. You have been on my mind, especially today and lo and behold, I see you have stopped by. I have missed you and hearing from you. I trust all is well. Do get in touch with me when you're available. I so look forward to chatting with you again. It has been way tooooooooooooo long. Aloha from this side of paradise.. alisa ;-)
3 comments:
Hey, I liked the idea of how few words are made into beauty using the photo. Great work.
You have written a lovely tercet poem with strong feelings and good rhythmic flow. I love the way the imagery speaks to me. Thank you for sharing it, my friend. You are always in my mind. Take care until next we chat.
Paterika
back in Barbados for a while
Hello my friend. You have been on my mind, especially today and lo and behold, I see you have stopped by. I have missed you and hearing from you. I trust all is well. Do get in touch with me when you're available. I so look forward to chatting with you again. It has been way tooooooooooooo long. Aloha from this side of paradise.. alisa ;-)
Post a Comment