Sunday, March 29, 2009

Enamored


you move me

beyond mere words on a page
more than any other,
profoundly so.

I am thunderstruck

stirring me in ways I've only dared to imagine
each lingering caress
leaves me wanting more,

so enraptured I've become...

(3.27.09.ajs)

14 comments:

Anonymous said...

I liked this poem, it was very simple but unique

27-Mar-2009.purplemist

Paradisefor2 said...

thank you, purple mist...

alisa

Anonymous said...

Fantastic.
If I was in love, I would read this and automatically think of my partner. Very well written, I can feel the emotion while reading it.

27-Mar-2009.taylor_yepp

Paradisefor2 said...

Aloha Taylor Yepp,

Thank you for your comment. I will be by soon.

alisa

27-Mar-2009

Anonymous said...

hi alisa

an endearing piece that would even strike a chord in the hardest of hearts.mesmerizing to the soul to say the least.

have a fab day

regards

hellfire


28-Mar-2009.hellfire

Paradisefor2 said...

Aloha hellfire,

Wishing for you the same.

I appreciate you and your time...

always,

alisa ;-)

28-Mar-2009

Anonymous said...

Alisa:

This piece moves me likewise! Awesome smooth flowing read like a big-hipped woman rocking her hips back and forth while she walks down the street!

Smooth read!

28-Mar-2009.wordplaya

Paradisefor2 said...

Hello Wordplaya,

~ ! lol ! ~

Big-hipped woman, huh?!

~ ! lol ! ~

I guess where there's rhythm, there's a beat... and where's there's a beat... it could be a heart beat.... and that heart beat could very well be dancing to the melody of love!

hmmmm...nice ;-)

Thank you for your time and sentiment. Wishing for you a great weekend.

alisa ;-)

28-Mar-2009

Anonymous said...

Seductively entertaining. :)

28-Mar-2009.GlennMcCrary

Paradisefor2 said...

Thank you Glenn....

Sending you smiles across these miles...

alisa ;-)

28-Mar-2009

Anonymous said...

I like this very much. Eloquently written.

he must be one very lucky guy!

28-Mar-2009.wordsmith

Paradisefor2 said...

Thank you, Wordsmith...

alisa

29-Mar-2009

Anonymous said...

Very nicely done. You say much with a brevity of words...well chosen words. The opening line really got my attention and sets the tone for the whole piece.

29-March-2009.Grizzled

Paradisefor2 said...

Aloha Grizzled,

Thank you for your time and for your kind sentiment.

I appreciate them and you.

alisa

29-Mar-2009