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Aloha
Sunday, March 29, 2009
Enamored
you move me
beyond mere words on a page more than any other, profoundly so.
I am thunderstruck
stirring me in ways I've only dared to imagine each lingering caress leaves me wanting more,
I guess where there's rhythm, there's a beat... and where's there's a beat... it could be a heart beat.... and that heart beat could very well be dancing to the melody of love!
hmmmm...nice ;-)
Thank you for your time and sentiment. Wishing for you a great weekend.
Very nicely done. You say much with a brevity of words...well chosen words. The opening line really got my attention and sets the tone for the whole piece.
14 comments:
I liked this poem, it was very simple but unique
27-Mar-2009.purplemist
thank you, purple mist...
alisa
Fantastic.
If I was in love, I would read this and automatically think of my partner. Very well written, I can feel the emotion while reading it.
27-Mar-2009.taylor_yepp
Aloha Taylor Yepp,
Thank you for your comment. I will be by soon.
alisa
27-Mar-2009
hi alisa
an endearing piece that would even strike a chord in the hardest of hearts.mesmerizing to the soul to say the least.
have a fab day
regards
hellfire
28-Mar-2009.hellfire
Aloha hellfire,
Wishing for you the same.
I appreciate you and your time...
always,
alisa ;-)
28-Mar-2009
Alisa:
This piece moves me likewise! Awesome smooth flowing read like a big-hipped woman rocking her hips back and forth while she walks down the street!
Smooth read!
28-Mar-2009.wordplaya
Hello Wordplaya,
~ ! lol ! ~
Big-hipped woman, huh?!
~ ! lol ! ~
I guess where there's rhythm, there's a beat... and where's there's a beat... it could be a heart beat.... and that heart beat could very well be dancing to the melody of love!
hmmmm...nice ;-)
Thank you for your time and sentiment. Wishing for you a great weekend.
alisa ;-)
28-Mar-2009
Seductively entertaining. :)
28-Mar-2009.GlennMcCrary
Thank you Glenn....
Sending you smiles across these miles...
alisa ;-)
28-Mar-2009
I like this very much. Eloquently written.
he must be one very lucky guy!
28-Mar-2009.wordsmith
Thank you, Wordsmith...
alisa
29-Mar-2009
Very nicely done. You say much with a brevity of words...well chosen words. The opening line really got my attention and sets the tone for the whole piece.
29-March-2009.Grizzled
Aloha Grizzled,
Thank you for your time and for your kind sentiment.
I appreciate them and you.
alisa
29-Mar-2009
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