The fire does burn and the flame attracts
The masses, as they're drawn towards desire,
Is it the magic they seek as they edge ever closer
Peering, as they will through the veil?
Or is it your heart they want, the same as I do
One that beats so steady and true ...
Priceless treasure awaits, just beyond that shrouded gate
Shimmering pathway straight to your soul,
Where you give me the key to all your forevers
And I welcome you into my world,
Where we'll dance by the light of the moonbeams
Drenched in rainbow clouds
Caught up in rapturous delight
Float along the cerulean sea, ecstatic
And bask in the glory of eternal love,
Predestined for all time, forever and true
Endless love we make,
The endless love ordained
The one we've spent forever seeking,
And now together, we claim ...
by:ajs [11.05]
7 comments:
I do not think I be first! But if that happenes it does! I love the path way!
Cann you show me morE?
I want to see too!
Love ~ Denny
It's a nice thought to know that as long and arduous the search is for love and companionship, once it's attained a real sense of living is discovered. And it's a nicer thought that, out of a crowd of people all vying for the same heart, it's a fruitless venture for them if that heart is also fighting the crowd, trying to get to you and yours. That's love, right there; endless love, to care little for the crowd as corny as the repetition sounds, lol. Don't let the bastards get you down! That's all they are, bastards, trying their best to prove themselves justifiably "modern" in their way of making sure happiness doesn't get in the way, when they see people claiming and living, love. Peace.
... fell2pieces
love is a wonderful experience with a special person in you life and the greater gift is you know that you have found each other the quest is over, you can plan your future just knowing that it is just the two of you ofrever until eternity..very nice and I am truly happy alisajs for both you...as you truly deserve the everlasting love..everyone deserves that..glad you two have meshed..eaglescorp
... eaglescorp
And again, I truly love this poem sis, as I did before. I'm so happy things seem to running smoothly. I have heard from your beloved, he is such a nice guy. I think you both are getting the "Real deal meal" lol. He has thanked me for the poem I wrote, and for being a true blue friend to both of you, it is my honor. Love, April
... gaffney
This is very beautiful. Full of imagery of another dimension. I have danced along the ribbons of Aurora Borealis, floated on moonbeams, but I have yet to find endless love. It is still a quest to be found in the silver lining of a cloud or at the end of a rainbow. All the best and a very Merry Christmas. ~Gail
.... Fiona Hymn
This is just beautiful my friend. I see glitter in the air as you two dance across the sand in the shadow of the rainbows.. I see love as a creature of incadescent colors and reflected in both of your eyes... I hear angels singing melodious praises of the sights of true love, all of this you gave to me with the words of this poem........Love Rene'
... rnprl2003
I love the poem, the thoughts, the spirit behind it, the clarity and openess.
Then again I love your writing, your talent, the flow is amazing...
Hugs, to my sis
... manekir
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