Sunday, June 01, 2008

Sweet Dreams



and I watch as you lay there
careful not to alarm,
your night scenes and visions
on this cool winter's eve ...

I pull back the blanket
and tenderly brush back your hair,
so beautiful you are, sleeping peacefully
I wonder if your dreams include me,
as I lay down beside you
to observe ...

you won't know I've been here
I am careful not to disturb
shhh!
not a sound I make ...

I stopped by for a bit
just to say hello,
just to let you know I still care
a kiss on your eyelids before I leave,
before you're aware that I've been here ...

thank you for just being you
you bring comfort to this weary soul
your wisdom and humor have provided sweet release
from gusty clouds of late
and rain storms full of plunder,
you are my joy
my night shade,
you welcome me here...

(ajs.10.22.07)

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Posted by: deckard
Sweet Dreams...are made of this!
beautiful pictures are created with your gentle and vivid
descriptions! you do have a touch...D

Anonymous said...

Posted by: ishaT
nice

Anonymous said...

Posted by: nature
Yeah! You really know what you talking about - spoke from the heart,
reminiscing... good work.

Paradisefor2 said...

Posted by: alisajs
thank you my friends.. aloha..;-)

Anonymous said...

Posted by: Jack123
TENDERLY TOLD---VERY NICE--JACK

Paradisefor2 said...

Posted by: alisajs
thanks Jack.. aloha

Anonymous said...

Posted by: alleycat
A wonderful piece of poetry here.

Paradisefor2 said...

Posted by: alisajs
thank you, alleycat... aloha

Anonymous said...

Posted by: J. Maw
your final stanza is especially heartwarming in its essence of sweet
dreams.

Anonymous said...

Posted by: willy
hey dude good poem

Paradisefor2 said...

?? dude?? You think I am a dude? Try again...lol... alisa ;-0