we gaze upwards at the same sky
and I wonder, wistfully
are we thinking the same thoughts?
feeling the same smiles
around our souls,
throughout these miles that stand between us...
the beauty of your voice
catches me off guard
and I'm soaring inside,
flying high as I glide toward these fields of ecstasy
and this thrill of you and me
with you, it's all brand new again
these tender moments
quiet times
beyond sublime,
and I'm falling
head over heels...
(04/17/2009.ajs)
29 comments:
osted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/18/09 at 07:55 AM
Sounds pretty decent. Heh. Another good one
Thank you, Gabriel...
Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/18/09 at 09:03 AM
Great romantic poem. A wonderful way to send your love across the miles.
Thank you, Maude...
Posted by David Ruppert on 04/18/09 at 09:50 PM
A beautiful and most magical poem you've written here. A combination of one's declaration of love while the other seems to be finding true love for the very first time. The magic could be felt while reading each word. Painting a most exquisite portraitof this most precious moment in time. Thanks for sharing, Love David
I appreciate you, David.. and thank you
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 04/22/09 at 12:23 AM
The imagery of this romantic poetry is spot on with a love that resides in memories and another great poem from Sweet Alisa!
Thanks again, Tony....
Posted by Laurie Blum on 04/22/09 at 09:20 AM
This is a s lovely as the writer herself! Ahh sweet love. Congrats on POTD alisaj!
Thank you, Laurie.. I am flattered.
Posted by Maria Massarella on 04/22/09 at 11:49 AM
...and beautiful it is the knowing you soar inside ... as is the joy of finding you high in PPS skies. Congratulations*hugs froma cross the ocean...m.a
Thank you, Maria.. .sending (((( hugs)))) across land and sea...
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/22/09 at 02:24 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Thank you, Kristina...
Missy
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Hey alisa!
This one was very sweet! Just honest and innocent. Really enjoyed it. Liked the last verse best... As always, good job!
18-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Hello Missy,
So nice to hear from you once again. Thank you for your kind comments.
alisa ;-)
18-Apr-2009
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Comment by hellfire
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hi alisa
again you have shown that you are unmatched when it comes to matters of the heart.this piece is a testament to that.well done
hope you are having a fab weekend
cheers
hellfire
18-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Hello hellfire,
*gulp*
*blush*
Why thank you! Oh kind and ever so talented one! Coming from you, I am quite honored and deeply humbled.
With respect to matters of the heart, isn't it amazing that love is so universal??? Just sayin' ... that's all...
lol
This one was inspired by a phone call I received recently, at the absolute best time ever!!! Have you ever been thinking about someone and they call???
Amazing!
I am having a wonderful weekend and wish for you the same, everyday!!!
alisa ;-)
18-Apr-2009
Comment by Wordplaya
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Alisa:
I love the thought that you and your lover are gazing at the same sky, that's righteous!
I feel the ecstasy that you do here because you have the power in your words to make me feel it.
Awesome write from the master of romance!
5 star nom and a save to you!
18-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Hello Wordplaya,
I love your comments! Thank you for your continual support and encouragement. It means a lot to me, deep inside.
Wishing for you and your loved one... a wonderful everything!
always,
alisa ;-)
18-Apr-2009
Comment by pink.wink
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good effort i like ur work
18-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Thank you, Pink wink...
alisa
22-Apr-2009
Comment by seuratski
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Awkward how people always look for something to share, even when they're millions of miles apart. As though distance could make you forget each other. I like the last stanza the best. You know you've got something special when everything feels brand new again.
18-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Hello Adam,
Thank you for your comments.
I personally don't think it's 'awkward' but rather 'enchanting' that two people separated by miles would look for or have the same thing to share...
That is the romantic in me, obviously.
alisa
18-Apr-2009
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Comment by Deckard
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sometimes the most direct and intimate phrases carry so much weight. That first stanza is perfect in every way. very nicely done!
19-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Thank you, Deckard...
Have you ever found yourself wondering if the one you are thinking about is thinking of you at exactly the same time?
And if he/she was, could you feel it? Could you sense it in your soul?
I find myself wondering a lot...
lol
Does it show?
lol
Wishing for you a great week ahead.
alisa ;-)
19-Apr-2009
Comment by GlennMcCrary
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So beautifully written as always. :)
21-Apr-2009
Comment by alisajs
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Aloha Glenn,
Thank you for your continued support and encouragement.
alisa ;-)
22-Apr-2009
Sorry it took me so long to get here. The loss of time is mine. I love this. The idea of looking at the same sky - thinking the same thoughts................the spirituality of being in the same place at the same time, though miles apart is breathtaking. Thank You. Colocby
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