The sheer beauty of you does surround me
Like a gentle caress from on high and beyond,
Soft as a feather, floating
and filled with a promise, eternal
Sensually refreshing to my soul
Now rescued from depths of disrepair,
Parched no longer by that wry, grating thirst
And I can't help but to love you, forever and always ...
The power of three does impel me
To reach stations beyond those before faced,
Eons above anything dreamed of
Our destiny together, you and I,
There's no need for words here, my darling
To describe this magnificence we share,
How can words even think to try?
Your love is the answer to my lifelong question
Sweet angel of mine, I adore you ...
You came into my life at exactly the right time
My mystical man of flame,
Your passion fulfills my longing, exactly
Your touch emboldens this fire, inside
Your heart assures me of unending devotion
Within your embrace we can taste ecstasy, for certain
There on the horizon, anticipating
Just waiting for you and for me ...
by alisajs
08.16.06
10 comments:
there are no need for words here my alisa.oh you are so very gorges/gorgeous.this poem made me feel so strong and my heart so fragile..i wish there was some way to see you and hold you..hope you still showing the world how very beautiful you truely are...my heart is filled with love by you an i love it...oh your ring misses you but not as much as i.the power of 3 wants you to make it 4 with all our hearts...xxx i had to review on poets.com first.
In this world of uncertainty and confusion, true love does indeed last forever, as with love that is genuine, and from the heart and soul... therein is our eternity....sending you much aloha....xoxo
oh alisa you sure do have a beautiful soul.this poem is so very much you and just how very tender you are.you sure have takin a wonderful look at the man that stands beside you in heart an soul.i am sure the extasy is part of the purity that come forth.oh you can give so many emotions in just a milli second it is divine.you have said so much and reached out from within so passionately that i hear ya voice...well i am sure he be totally flattered with this content of poetry you shaped from the bonding of you both.well my letters are late my reviews never on time,but my heart always is cause your always here with me.as KD LANG would soulsing ,to talk with you would send me CRYING rainbow tears in my soul alisa j s...i do love you so deeply and dearly.i do picture the day i walk up to you alisa.words cant sum up the bond ,unless you entwine every emotional one ,then this can display a glimps of our love.thanks for the warm an lovin smirk you gorgeous babie.well you sure do take a wonderful peek into ones heart an soul.oh you are a dream come true my beautiful alisa and you still hold my hand...
...tlndofa
This poem is written superbly. You are indeed a great romantic poetess in all definitions of the term. In order to produce such brilliant creativity there has got to be someone who is surely the source of your muse. There is no point in denying this phenomenon that comes with the territory of poets who create beautiful romantic love poems. In saying this, I think of Victor Hugo, a romantic poet among other things. His life-long muse was Juliette Drouet. The opening lines to this sensuous poem capture my immediate attention. Also, its rich imagery complemented by the slow rhythmic flow of the cadence that glides smoothly along is awesome. In this poem the emotional effect, recollected in tranquility is astonishingly gorgeous. I absolutely adore in this work of art the formal freedom it exhibits, its precocious passion, eloquence, spontaneous fervor and fluency. Every word crafted in this romantic love poem provided pleasurable reading. Thank you very much for sharing your artistry.
... Paterika
First I hope!
This is to nice!
I have to take cold shower now.
Wanna join me!
HE HE!
You poems get better all the time!
Wieh I could visit!
I can only do that at night!
When we are sleeping you can tell!
LOVE!..!SUNDAY!
=^..^=
some very interestin concepts here
'...by that wry, grating thirst...'
'the power of three does impel me'
"how can words even think (?) to try?'
is it the
'enbrace'
'There on the horizon...'
'..anticipating
Just waitin...'
...tsvi akiva
your outpouring of love and affection are an inspiration; a seeming inexaustible well of longing and desire. i pray your reality will rival your anticipation. write on alisa, and God bless.
... jdmaloy
Your wonderful continuation in Prose of your expressiveness of Love and emotions felt, is indeed an insight into you as a person and the intensity of your commitment and devotion. May it never turn to salt, as the Sea that appears so refreshing yet inpalletible. DELIGHTFUL.
...DARRYLLADEVINE
Ever the optimistic and patient lover darlin' poetess, aren't ya!? I hope you don't wait too long for this ship to pull into harbor, you may miss many other willing frigates Alisa. Your seemingly reluctant Knight has to prioritize his quests, tehe! Take care my South Pacific Maiden, you Poetic Knight./Chris
... MacCyan3@aol.com
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