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Thursday, November 13, 2008
Fairy Tales
could we have lassoed those raindrops with palms raised up high
as we blazed through with potions
full of reckless abandon
oblivious,
even to ourselves.
so certain we'd found that decadent delight
a cruel game, if that
and only for the well besotted
don't venture near if your heart's not yielded
toward lies and deceit from the other side,
yet it was not the other side that did us in
but rather a lingering memory,
climbing up that old woody nightshade
when no one was looking
when somebody cared,
back to a time when I used to believe
in certain fairy tales
so beholden was I to that dream ...
(11.13.08.ajs)
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12 comments:
Excellent imagery. This poem really struck a cord with me. Great job!
I love the line " climbing up that old woody nightshade "....
Posted by Soulwalker on Nov 14, 2008 7:06 PM
thanks amy
;-)
If we could turn back time; to murder in their sleep; the creaters of fairtales ..so much happier Cinderella would be...with the world today.
Posted by Robin on Nov 15, 2008 9:17 AM
lol
I think sometimes my middle name is cinderella!
lol
wishing you a happy Thanksgiving, Robin...
alisa
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/13/08 at 10:14 PM
Beautiful.
Thank you, Gabriel...
Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/14/08 at 07:40 AM
This poem says so much with so few words! I like the style of this.
Thanks Laurie...
Posted by George Hoerner on 11/14/08 at 10:31 AM
Very nice write lady. There is a lot in it and I'll be re-reading more than a couple of times.
I do appreciate you, George.. thanks...
Thanks again, Steve...
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