This kind of love is so brand new to my world
Tender and sweet like a soft, summer breeze,
With a hint of forever, whispering sweet
and I am touched to my core,
Bewildered, yet compelled ...
I have tasted your passion, intense and mind blowing
There can be no other for me there, anywhere
Felt the wrath of your anger, brutal
Ventured on those pathways of exploration and blame,
Lived on obsession for days without end
Traveled those same roads of forbidden desires, chagrined
Licked our wounds brutally, while acting like kids,
Walked away for a time to heal and to mend
Those cinnamon tears, bright red...
But one thing I know for certain is this
I have never known another with your signature style,
You drive me crazy and you do that so well
Without even trying, I believe,
and just when I think I have this all figured out
Stamped and sealed, ready to categorize and file,
You surprise me like this,
and I'm back to where I started
Bemused and intrigued, hopelessly ...
by: ajs
11 comments:
ahhhh one of those things where it's like you want to know anything and everything, while it's all right there in front of you, ready to take shape and take action, making a reaction in the end, a *sigh* for sure, this poem flowed greatly, and it didn't hold back anything I believe, an admiration of some sort, to make the writer breathtaken before the reader is breathtaken, awesome done once again!!
ah! yes... most intriguing...for sure...yes, intrigued....totallly...;-)
Wow you sure did this up nice!
did you fall in Love? HE HE!
All I know this is nice poem!
Thanks from 2nd day of fall!
LOVE ~ SUNDAY!
Wow! Now this is beautiful gurl, and intense, and one can feel your heart and soul in this write! Great poem sweets, and he must be smething to d this to you! :) I luv it gurl! Touching write! One luv sweets! :)
-JC-
sounds like you ain't ready t give up
sounds like you might be in love
i am very moved by that line
'licked our wounds brutallu,'
i see you sittin like a cat lickin over & over smoothin out the hurtin parts
lettin your toung flick hard
till its no longer a question
of healin
but the self mezmerizin
of the movement
till you meet that advisary
in love
& touch tounges t heal each other
...tsvi akiva
This one makes me feel like love is like a dance, a few steps forward, a few steps back, a few twirls, here and there, some gyrating and hip shakin....lol ok, so I'm getting carried away...Just enjoy the dance, ok? lol Great write, Alisa! Love the cinnamon tears!
... violetcove
Oh this poem was full of pain. The imagery made me cry. I believe that once bitten one should be shy. I believe that there are plenty fish in the sea wanting to be catched. Fresh fish is more wholesome. What more can I say to a bleeding heart. I enjoyed the read and how you drew me in so emotionally. Thank you for sharing your artistry.
... Paterika
As promised...bright shiny, shiny stars..and lots of them..lol. We're backing up the truck as we speak...beep, beep, beep..and thump..lol. It is one of your best Alisa...The one thing that I noticed is that when you use a voice of struggled reasoning..it gives your poems a softer sell...which is sweeter for the eyes and more real for the reader...Anyway, enjoy the sparklies..you earned them :) Seriously ..it's beautiful. Thanks!
PJM
Wow!! this is quite passionate piece. so many different thoughts and emotions here. As i read this magnificent piece it just moved my heart and soul. the tenderness and desire. the ending is so brilliant. what a great twist to a great poem. Love David
You have quite the way with your passionate poetry and the flow and imagery that you display is quite gripping. One heart!
Peace Be, Ozzie D.
He's got your head in a whirl, does he? Bemused and intigued ain't bad darlin'! When someone is imprinted upon your soul you are bond forever. Well quilled my pacific doll! Love the funky hat, tehe.../Chris
...MacCyan3@aol.com
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