Is that true love there, I discern
just beyond the horizon of your soul?
Shimmering in the distance with the familiar glow
I have recognized from times past
and can almost taste the magic,
but for your refrain,
Careful, as the steps may be uncertain
tho' the path remains the same,
The tender tug of true love's tapping on one's heartstrings
will seldom bring thunder and rain,
But rather the dawning realization
of what's been missing from your world,
Look around and notice, all you have is pain.
But Why?
Why settle for less than the very best
the universe has to offer?
Don't let that damaged ego and false pride rob you,
any longer ...
You know better than to buy into the world's big lie
and media's deception,
That after one passes the age of twenty-five
We're all put out to pasture, no exceptions
To graze among Geritol swishes and
Viagra alabasters,
Make sure we have our supply of Depends
for those unexpected leaky bladders,
And when our dentures no longer hold
our teeth in their proper position,
Might as well turn it in
Call it a day, for it's half past,
YOU DON'T SAY !!!
Have you forgotten the taste of a midnight fire?
enjoyed in a room for two, fueled by eager anticipation
and blue flaming desire,
You couldn't get there one second too soon,
When the sound of her voice would send you
The thought of her kiss excite
Knowing where those sweet lips would go,
You'd find yourself in overdrive
Just to get there ...
Just to see her ...
Just to lose yourself in her touch ...
For another moment of ecstasy ...
For another moment with true love ...
Have you forgotten the magic?
Don't let past hurts steal your joy
of what may be a dream come true,
Long overdue
The dream of me and you ...
by:ajs
15 comments:
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I love this one! How you do so nice poems!
My son said you were HOT!
Thanks so much!
LOVE ~ DENNY
LOL...you really are amazing the way you describe a situation. Some of what you've said is enought to give anyone reason for concern, lol. Of course you bring us back nicely with your steller rendition of paradise in the making. You have a great imagination that captivated your audiance. I for one am dumfounded.....
... BMD
Cold chills running up and down my spine, tingling all the way. OMG, I am feeling this one so much. The imagery is more than awesome, perfection exists in this poem. Simply a wonderful piece of art~~~Rene'
... rnprl2003
I haven't forgotten. There is magic in this poem. There is magic awaiting the page whenever you pick up your pen. 'The dream of me and you...' that is magic! If I close my eyes and fall into this world, will you promise not to let me out?
... towenstark
WOW, this poem is so alluring! If you were looking for someone of absolute true quality, this poem will find that person for you! I see another steady fan cropped up on your reviews. I'm in my detective suit again lol I wish you the best of luck. Oh, by the way, did Louie-louie go away? :) Love ya sis, April
... gaffney User
Again I can't praise enough you concept's and your insight. You so bring it all to life. Thank heaven even well past that 25 I don't have any of those problems and I will fight it kicking and screaming all the way! You have a heart full of love and it certainly shows my friend.....
Rochelle
... Stardust2284
This is a great piece of work ...a story well told ...your message rings out loud and clear ...there is real emotion in this poem! there is also humour the lines: "Make sure we have our supply of Depends
for those unexpected leaky bladders,
And when our dentures no longer hold
our teeth in their proper position" ...they did make me laugh! ...a great read! ...Daveda
... daveda
Ifind this amusing but wonderfully true in a way hat all grow opld someday .You just have to deal with it, me I vow to never grow old.
... angeliccarols
Great poem and yes it would be fantastic to find a partner forever. And yes we are healthier today. More viral. LOL Dimitri. Great poem my friend and again well written.
... dimitri1
This is another beautiful and wonderful write! I can relate to this one as well. Very well written with good imagery. Keep up the good writes.
... dotshot
In order to find true happiness, if even for one moment in time, one must lose the anchor from skeletons in order to be free to love. Good piece, sis, (p.s. I see cats is right in there still) LOL!
... golfshe
I love the humour in the poem about the fear of growing old, and the answer that we must hang on to every precious minute of life we have. Very wise advice,and you state it well.
... AlvinTEthington
You have good form in this poem. It’s well written and easy to follow. The meter flows well also. You handled your topic in an interesting manner, which draws the reader into your story. Nicely done.
... LadyLisetta
this is very, very good.i enjoyed it very much.there is nothing wrong with it at all.everything is so right and true. i really can't say enough about it to justify how perfect it is.very passionate and very inciteful.great work.you deserve much more than five stars.
...lewis222
What beautiful words you have written. What a beautiful poem. It sounds as though you truely know love, and are greatful for it. What a great poem.
... Ely Boy
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