Arise and come to me, my beloved
Take flight on angel wings and do not tarry,
This flame burns ever bright and steady
For the one I was created to love, only you ...
Let not your heart stumble nor dark clouds obscure
The promised fulfillment ordained from times past,
Set in celestial view, as a beacon
And signpost, to show you the way ...
Not hampered by distance, nor time
My soul sends your essence this message,
'Without you I'm empty' , 'Without you I'm blue'
I watch at the window of life
See others so happy and sigh ...
At night I can only imagine
Your touch, the caress of your hand
As you reach for me and we embrace
This love, we've spent a life time seeking,
This love, that now waits
At this place ...
by:ajs
25 comments:
As always you do nice poem!
I can do the window!
And you will not have to see others happy!
You will be!
I think you know what I meen.
This poem is so full of wanting.
And I can be in the brain of yours.
You will see!
LOVE ~ DENNY
Yet another beautiful poem. I wish, so much for you, that your love would just show up on your door step. I think your poems wouldn't sound so lonely :) They might have to be rated adult lol, and then, alas, I couldn't read them lol, love ya sis, April
That is an offer no one could refuse, nor would they want to. Of course one would have to be available, willing and receptive. Check, check...check, lol. I'd be right out there in a NY minute... the belle of the pacific ball; if I new for sure so as not to be made the fool. Intriguing offer my dear, worth considering. Nice write ..bmd
THIS IS SO LOVELY MY FRIEND WAITING FOR THAT SOULMATE I CAN TOTALLY RELATE A VERY GOOD JOB. AND A NICE READ I LIKE YOUR PICTURE YOU
PUT ON YOUR SITE. KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK.
GOD BLESS, SUNNY
Wow!! when i read this i can feel the warmth and the love you so deeply desire and seemed to have found. very touching indeed. i can relate to each word you've so brilliantly penned here. painting such an inviting picture. Love David
This was a beautiful creations once more Alisa...I so do hope that you experience that one true love that many seek. This was once again a light shining bright for that above to smile upon. May you continue to always walk within beauty and the light of your soul ~ Namaste Jen :))
You have a way with the words of love and
affection. All lead to a very beautiful conclusion in the mind. Your imagery is clear as ever. God Bless and write on...Rochelle
... Stardust2284
Astounding beauty is running rampant through this piece of poetic creation from your soul. Another simply wonder filled and soul fulfilling poem. I just love it, great flow with an alluring lilting tune in the background as one reads~~~~Rene'
... rnprl2003
It's not far down to Paradise
At least it's not for me
And if the wind is right you can sail away
And find tranquility
The canvas can do miracles
Just you wait and see
Believe me
Sailing takes me away
To where I've always heard it could be
Just a dream and the wind to carry me
And soon I will be free
Christopher Cross
You've got me sailing!!!
...towenstark
you are so talented. Beautifully written my poet friend. Saids it all, nice imagery, pace and flow. Nice write. God Bless, your friend
... denise1954
Now why can I not find a woman that loved me like this. I am a very loyal loving passionate man. Yet twice I marry the wrong person because of pressure and not wanting to hurt somebody. Then I get hurt. Sorry venting. You are lovely and this poem is wonderful to the heart. LOL Dimitri.
... dimitri1
You have penning some wonderful poetry of want and desire latey fine and fair poetess! You are a loving Pacific siren calling across the globe for your love. In this one your capacity for love is deep and wonderful Alisa, well done sweets!/Chris
... MacCyan3@aol.com
This is a great piece of work ...a story well told ...there is a very tender touch to this beautiful poem ...there is also real emotion! ...a great read! ...Daveda
... daveda
Wow...you just are overspilling with love! :o) What a delicate work, another filled with honestly written words of love and human nature. Absolutely lovely!
... BEASH
Wonderfully written as we all have found love here online at one time or another I think , but is it worth it ?
... angeliccarols
WOW! I feel the same way about someone special to me. I can relate to this one. I hope she is feeling this way about me as well? This one brings tears to my eyes as well because it has such meaning in my life right now. Very well written with good imagery.
... dotshot
Love poems can be so heart uplifting are so sad! I like the uplifting one better this one sadding me. I think that was your ideal! Nice job!
... MikeRSamford
What a beautiful love poem, and even the one stock phrase you use "without you, I'm blue" you work so well into the poem, it doesn't seem like a stock phrase. you create a longing in the reader (well, at least in me), for the kind of love you describe.
... AlvinTEthington
ee others so happy and sigh...yes, I feel
windows, open, the breeze of the seas, the
most beautiful lovers together in the essence
of time.
...nordicsister
I use to have these feelings of being blue and sad until I started loving mysel and did not allow anyone else to make me sad ot blue anymore. Those feelings are so depresing. I wish i could have stopped the pain before it approached my life.
...alejapoet
A nice devotion to a loved one. I feel that it's meaning is clear and well versed. Nice write friend. Tamara Pflipsen 11/17/2005
...tantriss
I like the poetry of love..It shows the heart in it's truest form..The only thing that compares with our love and that is of Gods..he even put it on the line one time..So continue in your quest for love.
... jt49
This love poem is a life raft in an ocean of love poems. The concept that love was ordained from above is well represented with your words. Don't change a thing.
...imgrayn48
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... Evilwayz1988
That was a refreshing poem. Thanks for the uplift. I needed that. Fine words, love all in one. Thanks again. Well done.
...pippins mom
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