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Monday, January 16, 2006
Truth ( 3/5/3 Senryu)
Lasting love Stays with those who find We have found
Why has it taken me sooo long to find this blog! I have just finished reading every word you have writen and am wiping tears from my eyes. Thankyou for expressing it all the way you have.
What a pleasant surprise. You have finally done it. Your blog is magnificent. What a way to go my poetic friend. I love this place and the graphics are fantastic. Oh, I believe in love and musing in love and this shall be my place to come and quench my thirst for it. Paterika
A Beautiful Senryu of two hearts Bound together by Love Eternal! I so adore when you can say So very much with so few words.. I know this Feeling well!!
Wow!! this is such a beautiful piece you've penned here. your hold so much truth spoken in these words. it's beautiful when two hearts do bond in the name of true love. Love David
so beautifully put...doubt if it has been said so elequently in such a short verse. Magical when seeking, and truly magical once it has been accomplished...Luv Lance:)
A simple truth, or a profound truth? When those who seek love, find love, it stays and it lasts, against all odds. As you well know. Trials come, but if you have found true love, you survive the trials, and come out stronger for them. That is truth in poetry, and in life. Lovely work. Dave ... houseofbrokenlove
I LIKE THIS SENRYU. LASTING LOVE IS HARD(IMPOSSIBLE?) TO FIND! WHEN YOU FIND IT, COVET IT, HOLD IT, NEVER LET IT GO! YOUR POEM SAYS THIS WELL. A VERY NICE SHORTY. JEFF
A lovely senyru regarding love and the tacitly understood trials. Lasting love takes two people who understand what love is and means. Many today mistake love, for example, for fear of loneliness, fear of rejection, fear in general. This is a blissful senyru to true love.
This is a beautiful piece. It is well written. The first two lines are syntactically hooked thus avoiding a choppy rhythm or a tun-on sentence. The rhythm is enhanced by the alliteration on the first line. What a lovely piece to share! Thanks. ...Prudencio Dumasis
Cool, the sentiments are right on target too. So much said with such few words, aren't these just wonderful to work with?? Another fantastic piece sis, Rene'
Beautifully written in this form I have just become aware of and have yet to try! 10 potent words - I really like the last line! Each line flows well into the next and the message is clear. Yes, I find here a true romantic! Smiles, ALas
12 comments:
Why has it taken me sooo long to find this blog! I have just finished reading every word you have writen and am wiping tears from my eyes. Thankyou for expressing it all the way you have.
What a pleasant surprise. You have finally done it. Your blog is magnificent. What a way to go my poetic friend. I love this place and the graphics are fantastic. Oh, I believe in love and musing in love and this shall be my place to come and quench my thirst for it. Paterika
A Beautiful Senryu of two hearts Bound together by Love Eternal! I so adore when you can say So very much with so few words.. I know this Feeling well!!
Excellent!!
Bravo!! SMILE
... ilaurenloves
Wow!! this is such a beautiful piece you've penned here. your hold so much truth spoken in these words. it's beautiful when two hearts do bond in the name of true love. Love David
... DemonStarChild
Nice poem! I love to see you have fun wit
your God given talents.
I can tell you enjoyed posting this one!
To you in the blue
I love you!
... ilovecatsokd
so beautifully put...doubt if it has been said so elequently in such a short verse.
Magical when seeking, and truly magical once it has been accomplished...Luv Lance:)
...lance w toohey
A simple truth, or a profound truth? When those who seek love, find love, it stays and it lasts, against all odds. As you well know. Trials come, but if you have found true love, you survive the trials, and come out stronger for them. That is truth in poetry, and in life. Lovely work. Dave
... houseofbrokenlove
I LIKE THIS SENRYU. LASTING LOVE IS HARD(IMPOSSIBLE?) TO FIND! WHEN YOU FIND IT, COVET IT, HOLD IT, NEVER LET IT GO! YOUR POEM SAYS THIS WELL. A VERY NICE SHORTY. JEFF
... seay49
A lovely senyru regarding love and the tacitly understood trials.
Lasting love takes two people who understand what love is and means. Many today mistake love, for example, for fear of loneliness, fear of rejection, fear in general.
This is a blissful senyru to true love.
... Hoyden
This is a beautiful piece. It is well written. The first two lines are syntactically hooked thus avoiding a choppy rhythm or a tun-on sentence. The rhythm is enhanced by the alliteration on the first line. What a lovely piece to share! Thanks.
...Prudencio Dumasis
Cool, the sentiments are right on target too. So much said with such few words, aren't these just wonderful to work with?? Another fantastic piece sis, Rene'
.... rnprl2003
Beautifully written in this form I have just become aware of and have yet to try! 10 potent words - I really like the last line!
Each line flows well into the next and the message is clear. Yes, I find here a true romantic! Smiles, ALas
... alwaysasking
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