with you, I believe I could begin again
realize within this spark that flames
for one,
is it you
this man of whom I am so curious
intrigued, no less
I feel your hugs
your life and loves,
they pour over me each time we discuss
I sense your pain and tenderness
and want to reach
dare I, this time
press beyond my comfort zone
engage with your world,
enter your realm
and know you ...
(8.12.08.aj)
8 comments:
Your poetic style has changed. The flow of this poem is very very smooth. It reads like a fine novel, and leaves the reader filled with a longing for something,"LOVE" perhaps....A yearning for a love or desire not there, just out of reach, maybe for fear of pushing away...I think that your poem is very emotional and sense the verge of tears all through out. I love this one Alisa...Yours Allen
YES I THINK YOU SHOULD.....MY WORLD IS A BIT DIFFERANT THAN YOURS ..BUT WHOS TO SAY THAT I DONT HAVE ROOM IN IT FOR YOU.!.!
AND THAT YOU MAY JUST FIND GREAT COMFORT IN IT.!.!.!
DON"T GO UP THE STAIRS!!! lol, just kidding. At least you have a lil mystery working for you right now, I just being pensive, be reckless, but be careful!! lol what a oxy moron i am , just be safe princess.
Posted by Robin on Aug 13, 2008 6:43 AM
Oh, go. Go up those stairs, woman...no looking back. ;^)
Posted by Tara on Aug 13, 2008 3:22 PM
Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/13/08 at 05:28 AM
..... quite exceptional....
Thank you, Joe...
Posted by George Hoerner on 08/13/08 at 09:07 AM
Nicely done Alisa. And remember nothing ventured nothing gained. Good luck.
Thanks George
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