Thursday, August 28, 2008

aflame again


and if it were you
you and you alone
all along,
the one I knew would be the answer
our solution,
to everything we both needed and desired
from this point forward,
would you
venture near?
again
this time,
knowing it was me?

(ajs.8.28.08)

7 comments:

Anonymous said...

by Charlie Morgan on 08/29/08 at 07:00 AM
...ooohhh, so warm, inviting and yet soooo biting in it's up-frontness...sheeesh, i'm in awe of the guts to ask someone who knows us, if they want another spin..., lovely twist of the romeo juliet thang...i like i like.

Anonymous said...

George Hoerner on 08/29/08 at 07:55 AM
Well spoken Alisa. How much peole change over how many years is still an open queston.

Anonymous said...

by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 09:58 AM
... this is exceptional.....

Anonymous said...

Marie Andreas on 08/30/08 at 02:32 PM
Sharp poem! Super work! :)

Paradisefor2 said...

thank you all for your time and comments...

alisa ;-)

cdkiwi said...

Maybe, my brains says no my heart says yes, i cant decide, but just to hear you say that warms me through!

Paradisefor2 said...

You are so kind.. thank you for your comments...

alisa