I love the sound of your voice
Caressing my soul like only you can do,
When you call to me and say my name
In that special way, like you do
Only you ...
Listening to you breathe
Finds me flushed with desire,
Needing to get closer
I do ...
I love how you love a woman
A dream come true, completely
I love ...
by: alisajs
[6.21.06]
13 comments:
well this is very tender and shows very much the lovin alisa i love.oh you sure are gorges.this poem is a delight to log on too.i love it...hey i did also read ya birthday poem..i'll show me kids.i hope all is well an your still got the most gorges laugh that i ever did hear,i mist that as much as i do you and the alisa in this poem.. ya circle does miss ya also.hey i dont mean to bug you so i just review a few of your old poems ,to see how ya been.since i do know you i am proud to see an grasp this poem...hope you find another heart to reflect your beautiful shine alisa..yes i also would have loved this poem just as much a year ago.hellow there and i remember ya so thanks for all the warm thoughts...hey alisajs that poem hurt heaps for example the 3rd line was a mean tease to me an the core of me heart an you know it.ouch!you listen to well to the other heart it seems,i can hear you in this poem with ya heart an soul.
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♥♥♥♥ ♥
★★★★★
... tlndofa
An adoring poem from the Pacific Goddess of Love, lol! You know doll, this poem is just crying out to be a heart-shaped effort. Let me see if it works in this review box:
love the sound ---- of your voice
Caressing my soul like only you can do,
When you call to me and say my name
In that special way, like you do
Only you ...
Listening to --- you breathe
Finds me flushed with desire,
Needing to get closer
I do ...
I love how you --- love a woman
A dream come true,
completely
I love ...
(triplet hearts or)
I love the sound of your voice
Caressing my soul like only you can do,
When you call to me and say my name
In that special way, like you do,
Only you. Listening to you breathe
Finds me flushed with desire,
Needing to get closer, I do...
I love how you love a woman
A dream come true,
completely
I love ...
(one, lol)
I tried, tehe... Nice loving hula girl!/Chris
... MacCyan3@aol.com
Simple but full of love darlin'!! It might have been expanded just a bit to add more flavor but it was too the point and oh do I understand about the voice...isn't that hot? I love that most of all.
Take care.
Christie
... butterflin
Review:
This is such a sensual delight. You have done a marvelous job creating a mood of love and passion with so few words. Bravo!
... goldkey
Another piece filled with your beautiful souls song in every line. It is soft, natural, and so very real .... we love this way too don't we? .... Rene'
... rnprl2003
This is a nice love poem here. Good flow from top to bottom. Good imagery to paint the picture of this love so complete and true.
... atbc
Another beautiful masterpiece. So few words, yet they express so much. this one is so sweet and so tender. to experience something this magical would indeed be a dream come true. thanks for sharing such a wonderful read. Love David
... DemonStarChild
I like how your stanzas get smaller and get more to the point...like you are sitting there looking at your love and thinking these very things...I guess what I am trying to say is that it reads as very "real time" to me.
... ashadowdncr
this could be made into a trilogy of pieces......I Love....
the feel of your touch..
the look in your eyes...
the warmth of your heart...
the taste of your lips....etc....
how about that for a challenge my sweet....smile...go for ...lance w toohey
Ahhhh! BEautifully Written!! Yes this is Loving true.. When a man loves a woman and the woman feels it this way .. Nothing is sweeter!
Excellent!!
SMILE
,,,ilaurenloves
You have written a nice love poem. To make this a great love poem, add some details that show what you tell. Have you ever read Byron's "She Walks in Beauty," or E. B. Browning's "Soonets from the Portuguese?"
,,, FreyasFriend
5* Poem! Always som stupid poet give you
less! This poem about love is nice!Also thanks for seeing my poems!
You are so nice to me!
You are poet that hangs in here!
I love that I do!
Andria!
...I LOVE YOU FOR EVER
Found this poem very deep in emotion of love.
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