How can these feelings be denied?
It's been far too long, we've both felt them too,
Just afraid to say or even speak
What's so plainly obvious to all,
Yet somehow if we dance around these words
Crying to be heard,
Do we really think we can fool our hearts
Into believing -
We're nothing more than friends?
Friends of course, that goes without saying
But what kind of friend simply craves your touch?
What kind of friend yearns for more
And not from just anyone, only you?
How do I explain this passion within
That screams your name?
I cannot tame this fire inside that ignites,
The sweetness of your love incites me
Towards ecstasy everytime we open that door ...
I've got to know you feel it, too
How this burns right through my soul,
And I won't quit 'till I know for sure
The same is true for you,
I've just got to know
You need me, too ...
by: alisajs
[10 July 2006]
12 comments:
Oh my goodness this poem was written for me. I "Just Gotta Know" too. The imagery is full of emotion and exactly how I feel. Never thought finding love the second time around would be so stressful. Perhaps a change of scenery again would for me reap rewards, lol. This poem drew me into it emotionally and reflectively and that's what makes a great poem. Thank you for sharing ... Paterika
so many questions in this one. You seem to be screaming your hearts frustration. 'How do I explain the passion within that screams your name?' I think you do so very clearly. We all feel what you feel here. This longing to connect with what is so hard to attain...a love that brings contentment to your life. t
... towenstark
just goota know
sometimes knowin
is
everything
sometimes
knowin
is the worst option
out there
you have written a deep
from the heart
& comin outta the spirit
poetry
that speaks t me
i understand your language
.. tsvi akiva
Such an honest, heartfelt passionate poem...You have such a way of expressing what is in your heart in an open, vulnerable place. I can hardly wait to read your poems once that door is fully open!
...violetcove
This is pretty poem! I wish I coud
vist more, Do you know how I feel?
Look at last verse.
and that is me!
over 1000 poems gone now.
Please keep writting poems
I only have one
stupid poem now.
For you to see
+=^..^=+
... SUNDAY AFTERNOON
great finish to this piece sweetheart....all the emotional outpouring stored within this piece is summed up in those last two lines......a top piece of work....Luv Ya:):)
... lance w toohey
This is a poem every 'friend' should read. There is a lot to consider..Red my poem 'Friendship, now sweeter'. I enjoyed yours. I hope you will enjoy mine...
Thank you...Mollie..
This is wonderful. Either he is a smart man and knows or you need to give him this poem. Not ot diss guys but sometimes they need the obvious pointed out! Well done on this ppoem your emotions flowed well through this, Patty
I love this. what's wrong with exploring being more than friends? if more people asked, there will be more fullfilled relationships. great peom. keep it up!
... hunnibee92
Love this poem! You placed your heart on your sleeve for all to see. Your poem has all the "gentle passion" needed to express your emotions. Great poem! Robert
... Robert J Hughes
Take it and run with it. It's there or else you wouldn't be feeling it.. its that simple. Don't make it any more difficult than it already is. Trust in it and you can relax and be happy. Nventr7
Beautifully Written!! Always when we love with all our heart and soul.. we need to know For Sure how he (she) feels within the deepest realm of heart and soul about the relationship..the pure unabashed truth of what Love really means in anothers reality of mind...basically for our own sanity...
Excellent!!
SMILE
... ilaurenloves
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