I need no longer look for love
or comfort from a dream,
Priceless lessons you have taught me
those, only you have seen ...
As others clamor with mindless chatter
Your insight reigns supreme,
You see beneath this outward shell
Into the depths of me ...
The little girl with arms outstretched
Sometimes sad and lonely,
At others, quite perplexed
For reasons yet resolved,
In need of someone
Loving and genuine,
Giving from the heart and soul
Someone to believe
Someone, who won't walk away,
From me ...
by: alisajs
"31 May 2006"
8 comments:
I love the first stanza of this one...'comfort of a dream'...we all need someone who won't walk away. But I am guilty of that myself. were my reasons sound. so many questions unanswered. Anyway, I love this piece. you always send me to thinking. t
nother soul gripping write replete with all the emotion you bring to everything you pen. i must respond further and will do so in a direct message. look for it. write on my friend, and god bless.
...jdmaloy
There is something about this poem, some great depth of honesty and self knowledge that touched me. Sounds very introspective and open and vulnerable. I loved this one, my friend. Makes me want to give you a big hug!
... violetcove
there is often a walkin way
of folks
when they feel they're gettin
just a touch too close
don't know who
would walk away from you
don't know why they would
but i can well understand
the feelins of lonliness
that wal;kin way
can breed
i do believe
you'll find that lovin genuine
someone
he'll show up
can't say when or where
but your own pricelessness
&
insight
& the gaurd of your shell
& your need for honest holdin
&
the fines of your poetry
will see you through
just keep you eyes & heart open
&
believe
&
believe in yourself
...tsvi akiva
Another poem that shows the heart that propels the intellect...quite nice to see this side of your words Alisa : )"The little girl with arms outstretched" is a line that really sells the image of innocence. Again..truly wonderful...thanks, n seez ya later!!
... PJM
First I hope!
I do not walk away unless I am asked too!
And trust me I have ben asked to alot.
So you do nice poem and you always do!
Pluss You do trust me!.
That is all I can say!
God Bless this poem!
It is down right so true!
Love ~ denny
this one makes me think you are talking about a child who has love for his/her mother without question that kind of love is unbeatable x suzy x
... nannasuzy
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