She comes in through the door filled with fabulous words
Her charms are not exactly what they may seem,
Tho' she banter and blush, is she?
Or simply a shadow in the soft, summer breeze...
He stared at her image for what seemed like days
Full of desire, he was soon flush with flames,
Needing her more than he knew what to do with
Surely, a friend would not lie or deceive, would she?
Seasons come and seasons go
Or at least we are told they follow an order,
Of some sort, set in motion by the ancients
Meekly, we listen and obey...
But what if, what was real
never really existed?
But rather a dream on the inside,
How many would choose slumber?
When they ultimately discovered
Reality is no more or no less
Than what you allow yourself
to perceive and recieve ...
by :alisajs
99.17.06)
4 comments:
This poem has a rich imagery flowing smoothly in rhytmic cadence. The tone sends out a cloud of darkness in well crafted words and phrases that surely reflect that all is not well in the love/romance department as evident by words spoken by the persona in this poem. The creativity of this poetess is fantastic for her talent for designing true to life romatic poem such as this one is amazingly beautiful. Truly this is a great write and I found much pleasure in reading the poem. Thanks for sharing your artistry.
... Paterika
Great imagery to say the least *yeow~* --=great free verse goin on here my poet friend, with a depth of persuaded dream going on too, hehhe, keep up the great work always
... Vroom
How come you did not tell me you had pretty
poem!
Oh well vroom likes to be first!
Thanks for this!
LOVE SUNDAY!!!!!!
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Very intruiging question you ask here and states a profound truth. very well asked at that. This is a great work, thanks for sharing.
... NoWingsToFly9797
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