Don't worry, my darling
I am here,
I have loved you forever
That will never change,
Can you feel my heart all around you?
Ecstasy dances each time I remember
How you told me,
'I love you, my baby'
'You're gorgeous'
No, you are!
And each time I hear these words in my head
I'm overcome with my need for you,
Until then, we'll meet in our dreams...
On that day you arrive
There'll be sunshine at midnight
We'll sigh as the heavens proclaim,
In the stars high above
When destiny decrees,
Forever, you'll be here with me
Moment by moment, we'll savor each one
Then string them together,
Our eternal love ...
by: ajs
4 comments:
I can relate to this poem as a whole as well as many others who are deeply in love or once deeply in love, great flow overall with a center of dialogue in which opened me up as the reader to experience what words were said, awesome done!!
My, what a dream! Sound like a romance worthy of eternal love. "On the day you arrive" leads me to believe this is an online love affair. I can relate to every word you've written (including the "gorgeous" argument), and look forward to that day's arrival. Very well written and very evocative. Highly romantic and recommended reading. Blessings! :0) Juvie
Sounds as you got back
to your x !
That is rare To do!
Kindda late for Me to do.
She is on her third marriage now!
She is so stupid!
Forgot the time of day!
You do up nice love poems!
LOVE ~ SUNDAY!
i see an ever so fine string of stars
a neckless cross the sky
i wish the destiny that you dream of
comes true
with a lover who will be forever
a constellation of two
brighter than the longest chain of stars
a cosmos of shared company
in the comfort of your hearts
...tsvi akiva
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